Improved version of front cover

Here I have improved my front cover of the magazine. I have stretched the masthead and made the writing go beneath the band members head. However, the title cannot be read clearly and the masthead doesn't read Radar! what it should do, so I am going to make some improvements to do this. To the main headline I have changed the font to make it fit in with the pop style of my magazine. I have enlarged the bands name more then the other text, as when looking at existing magazines this is the technique they use.